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Meredith Rankin's avatar

For me, I always try to avoid coincidences in my own work. (Perhaps partly number six?) It's too convenient and I've seen too many reviews where readers dislike coincidences. The detective just happens to see/hear something or encounter someone, etc. Perhaps one coincidence near the beginning is okay--the amateur detective happens to find the body or something along those lines--but too many just feels lazy on my part as the writer.

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Loretta Capeheart's avatar

The rule to not allow the criminal to be anyone whose thoughts the reader has followed may be too limiting. I kind of like the unreliable narrator when it's done well and think maybe a criminal whose thoughts are somehow so muddied or self delusional as to not allow the reality of their crime to seep in to their thoughts might be a nice surprise to the reader. 😊

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